English 8 @ OHS 2018-19

Tuesday, November 27, 2018

Social Media Argument: Writing Mentor's Feedback

Here is an example of feedback one student received about his social media argument essay. You can see the feedback is very specific and helpful. This advice is paramount for students to use as they revise their essays.





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